Comments? Suggestions? I need all the help I can get! :)

[linuxuser12345]

Hi, I just entered my latest work into the Onieric contest on Flickr. Here is the link: http://www.flickr.com/photos/64718148@N06/6015453382/

Does anyone have any comments, suggestions, or criticism? I need all the help I can get! I am really hoping to get one of my works in this release!

[linuxuser12345]

Here's my Flickr page: http://www.flickr.com/photos/64718148@N06/

Please, I really want some feedback so I can alter my works for the better

[prokoudine]

1. AFAIK, Canonical is after silhouettes, not photos.

2. You put the "cat" in the center and it's looking to the left. The basic composition rule is that if the subject is glacing sideways, give it more space to glance at. Your other submission follows this rule.

3. There's no need to put "11.10" in there. I don't remember seeing number of release on Ubuntu wallpaper ever.

[linuxuser12345]

Yeah, I was thinking of Kubuntu for a little bit
Thank you. I will edit it shortly and post a new one.

[whatthefunk]

Why is the cat floating in space?

[linuxuser12345]

Okay, here is my new one: http://www.flickr.com/photos/6471814...l-1731759@N21/
What do you think?

[linuxuser12345]

Why is the cat floating in space?

It's not really supposed to be "Space." It's more like "Defined Abstract."

[whatthefunk]

Personally, I dont want a cat on my desktop. I doubt many people do...

[linuxuser12345]

I made a simplified version, if you look on my Flickr.

[HunterDX77M]

Personally, I dont want a cat on my desktop. I doubt many people do...

I agree with this guy. But I do like the other ones you've got up. Particularly, Australian Aurora and Lens Distortion.