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Istonian
November 26th, 2008, 06:13 PM
So I had to do a little research paper for school. I decided to do one Linux. There are a few spelling and grammatical errors because it is a rough draft, I typed it fast and didnt feel like correcting them. Tell me what you think!


http://istonian.webs.com/blog.htm

Ub1476
November 26th, 2008, 06:30 PM
I haven't read the whole draft, and I'm no expert on Linux, but wouldn't it be wise to put some sub-headers? Just so the reader kinda get a feeling of what the following paragraphs is about, instead of just reading paragraph after paragraph (which inevitable becomes very boring).