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Howitzer777
August 11th, 2008, 10:12 PM
my first wallpaper, i might add to it later but the link is below

http://i34.tinypic.com/5ufj8k.jpg

xakh
August 11th, 2008, 10:30 PM
It's not bad! still needs work, but it's a good start. The most obvious problem is that the marks from the smudge tool are painfully obvious, and it really sticks out in comparison to the hard edges of the picture. In my opinion, it would work better as a vector, where those soft edges would turn to harder spikes. I know it's meant to symbolize fire, but since the bird itself is stylized, wouldn't the fire be too? Just my two cents, keep it up!

Howitzer777
August 11th, 2008, 11:30 PM
no smudge tool was used, where does it seem like it was?

Crafty Kisses
August 11th, 2008, 11:36 PM
no smudge tool was used, where does it seem like it was?

Looks pretty good, looks like it needs to be sharpened but other than that kudos!

SphereCat1
August 12th, 2008, 12:47 AM
Nice! Maybe have some fire come from the wings?

xakh
August 12th, 2008, 12:56 AM
no smudge tool was used, where does it seem like it was?

it looks like it was used on what I assume to be the fire behind the bird.

mzm2000
August 12th, 2008, 01:32 AM
Nice! I like the concept!

rastari
August 25th, 2008, 12:30 PM
possibly make the phoenix a little bigger with some yellow and red on the wings, nice start though