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Sukarn
December 30th, 2007, 12:37 PM
I wrote a couple of poems for Christmas and New Year recently. I would like to hear anything you might have to say about it, critics are welcome as well.


Merry Christmas

Be it summer, winter or a hailstorm,
You'll always be there in my mind.
I wish we remain friends forever,
Through the ages, yes, forever and ever.
'Cause this Christmas I did realize,
Life without friends is not a real life.
I may be a little late to say "Merry Christmas",
but hey, at least I remembered.



Happy New Year

Its that time of the year
The one we call New Year
The end of one and beginning of another year

Its time to take resolutions
Which we know will be broken
So what is the point, you may ask
I would say "Mental satisfaction"

Even with the flowers and singing and dancing everywhere
I just keep wishing that you were over here
Wherever you are, whoever you're with
To you, my dear friend
I just want to say "Happy New Year"

So let the countdown begin
Let the party heat up
Its time to rejoice
After all, it is the beginning of a new year.


Oh, and it goes without saying that I wish the entire Ubuntu community and staff a very Happy New Year (Christmas is already gone).

LaRoza
December 30th, 2007, 12:41 PM
Nice little poems :)

I like the second stanza of the second poem, quite true. Although my new year's resolution will remain the same as last year: 1280x1024

You certainly have more affection for others than I.

KhaaL
December 30th, 2007, 01:01 PM
Nice poems! I thought I was the only poet around here:P


Nice little poems :)

I like the second stanza of the second poem, quite true. Although my new year's resolution will remain the same as last year: 1280x1024

You certainly have more affection for others than I.

join us in the 1680x1050 land, you will not regret it ;)

Sukarn
December 30th, 2007, 01:05 PM
Nice poems! I thought I was the only poet around here:P



join us in the 1680x1050 land, you will not regret it ;)

I use 1280x1024 as that is the max my monitor supports.

LaRoza
December 30th, 2007, 01:05 PM
join us in the 1680x1050 land, you will not regret it ;)

Give me a monitor :)

I like my 17" LCD, although I might eventually get a 19 in.

(I don't watch movies or anything on it)

I wrote many poems, but never share them.

Sukarn
December 30th, 2007, 01:16 PM
Give me a monitor :)

I like my 17" LCD, although I might eventually get a 19 in.

(I don't watch movies or anything on it)

I wrote many poems, but never share them.

I'm right there with you. I'm using a 17" monitor, and I'll keep using it until it dies or malfunctions.

I write a lot of poems but these are the first ones I'm sharing.

LaRoza
December 30th, 2007, 01:17 PM
I'm right there with you. I'm using a 17" monitor, and I'll keep using it until it dies or malfunctions.

I write a lot of poems but these are the first ones I'm sharing.

I shredded mine a while ago.

Sukarn
December 30th, 2007, 01:29 PM
I shredded mine a while ago.

I didn't need to shred mine. I lost them.