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oddabe19
May 13th, 2005, 09:15 PM
So i've had this basic Linux FAQ site up since about September-ish of 2004, haven't really had anybody critique it yet...

so, it's up to you.

Give me your opinions...
I want to keep it simple (for dial-up), that's why there's nothing fancy on it.

Check:
Information
Spelling
Grammar
etc....
And give me suggestions.

the site...

http://home.comcast.net/~amsilveira/linuxsite/

KiwiNZ
May 13th, 2005, 09:37 PM
A good site , it loads fast , something I always appreciate . The font is clear and easy to read .
One small point I would delete this line "Interested in not having to deal with the Microsoft Corporation's greed" . Its negative and can turn customers off. This i sthe old salesman in me , One of the primary rules of selling is Don't knock the opposition , but sell your advantages .

Other than that well done :)

jerome bettis
May 13th, 2005, 09:41 PM
The operating system has saved coorperations

run spell check!

bored2k
May 13th, 2005, 10:07 PM
One of the primary rules of selling is Don't knock the opposition , but sell your advantages .[/font]

Wow. You learn new things every day :D

poofyhairguy
May 13th, 2005, 10:08 PM
One of the primary rules of selling is Don't knock the opposition , but sell your advantages .


I study marketing speak all day, you are a natural kwiwinz