Design Tips ? 16 second Video

[josephmills]

Hello there I am making something and was wondeing if you would look at it and give me any pointers or things that you would also like to see in the thing that I am making,

The thing that I am making
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=auxg1cz3b7w

Thanks for you time and I look forward to hearing from you.

[Gremlinzzz]

:popcorn:sorry can't help i don't use unity.