April 5th, 2010, 11:50 PM
This is the community is my view i hope you guys watch the full video it would really mean allot to me you guys thanks again for allowing me to post and express my self here it really does mean allot :)
I hope you guys watch and no this is not advertising in anyway atleast not in my opinion i just want to let you guys how much the community means to me :)
April 6th, 2010, 04:18 AM
It's a pretty decent start, but lacks a few things that would have really sold me:
-It's all one thing, at one angle, with just your voice. There is no variation, and so it's just five or six minutes of you talking.
-You look away from the camera a couple times as if you're trying to think of what to say.
-It would be neat to get a bunch of videos of people showing some kind of "Linux Pride" or something, to show how happy it makes people.
-A catchy inspirational number would've done me in for sure.
All in all, a pretty solid video. You make some pretty good points, and you have some pretty great stuff on your channel. I think there's more that can be done though.
April 6th, 2010, 06:32 AM
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