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dragos240
February 22nd, 2009, 03:02 PM
I woke up in bliss next to the computer screen
Blue and yellow and not green,
I clicked on my user,
and no surprise,
it started up,
oh so silently,
but as i was about,
to start my document,
to my surprise,
a blue screen,
met my eyes,
with white letters,
that said "go away",
i promptly did,
and never stayed,
that is why,
that linux is my os,
no surprises,
have happened to me,
since that day,
and now i am happy,
once again.

Tehe, thought of it last night.

Steve H
February 22nd, 2009, 03:03 PM
Very good.

;)

dragos240
February 22nd, 2009, 03:04 PM
Very good.

;)

Thanks :D

jnw222
February 22nd, 2009, 03:27 PM
lol:popcorn:

dragos240
February 22nd, 2009, 03:29 PM
te he.

spoons
February 22nd, 2009, 03:35 PM
Nice poem but not very accurate. :p

dragos240
February 22nd, 2009, 03:37 PM
Nice poem but not very accurate. :p

I know, it's a bit exaggerated. But still it has some anti-Microsoft humour in it.

SonnHalter
February 22nd, 2009, 04:53 PM
no rhyming?

dragos240
February 22nd, 2009, 05:00 PM
no rhyming?

Technically poetry doesn't have to have rhyming, and i DID have some rhyming in there.

DeadRobot
February 22nd, 2009, 05:29 PM
No iambic pentameter?

Jk nice poem.

dragos240
February 22nd, 2009, 05:36 PM
No iambic pentameter?

Jk nice poem.

Thanks :)

Eisenwinter
February 22nd, 2009, 06:17 PM
Technically poetry doesn't have to have rhyming, and i DID have some rhyming in there.
Quinn: "I just found out poems don't even have to rhyme, how easy is that?!"

;)

But now to the point: you have to remember that the way we read it, is not the way you wrote it.

I mean like, you had a certain jingle, or music, in your head, to which you wrote this poem.
Others don't have that same music when they read it, so it may sound a little different than what you intended.

Still, good poem. ;p

alexandari
February 22nd, 2009, 06:21 PM
BSOD > all

emshains
February 22nd, 2009, 06:27 PM
Well, there is nothing technical about art, but the way you make it. But, people judge are as a result, not the technique you made the result.

So, the content and the idea are pretty good, but the result isn't as enjoyable as I was hoping it would be.

dragos240
February 22nd, 2009, 09:13 PM
Quinn: "I just found out poems don't even have to rhyme, how easy is that?!"

;)

But now to the point: you have to remember that the way we read it, is not the way you wrote it.

I mean like, you had a certain jingle, or music, in your head, to which you wrote this poem.
Others don't have that same music when they read it, so it may sound a little different than what you intended.

Still, good poem. ;p

I didn't have any song in my head :p