My suggestions. You changed data partition from ext4 to ntfs and have only one swap with an encrypted /home so all the other swaps are commented out. If it works ok, then you can delete the commented out lines.
sudo cp /etc/fstab /etc/fstab.backup
gksu gedit /etc/fstab
If you are in system or can boot run this after changes. If mounting from liveCD path will include the /media and mount that you give it.
sudo mount -a
If no errors it just returns or else tells you the issue.
Preferred entry style:
# /etc/fstab: static file system information.
# Use 'blkid' to print the universally unique identifier for a
# device; this may be used with UUID= as a more robust way to name devices
# that works even if disks are added and removed. See fstab(5).
# <file system> <mount point> <type> <options> <dump> <pass>
proc /proc proc nodev,noexec,nosuid 0 0
# / was on /dev/sda9 during installation
UUID=240553a1-a638-4c00-b4d4-01ee9b235d9a / ext4 errors=remount-ro 0 1
# swap was on /dev/sda5 during installation
#UUID=e7cbcac5-9e26-4654-ae6f-6f7b228d6466 none swap sw 0 0
#/dev/mapper/cryptswap1 none swap sw 0 0
/dev/mapper/cryptswap2 none swap sw 0 0
#/dev/mapper/cryptswap3 none swap sw 0 0
UUID=44EBC5660C2616FA /mnt/data ntfs auto,users,rw,relatime 0 0
UUID=44EBC5660C2616FA /mnt/data ntfs defaults,nls=utf8,umask=000,uid=1000,windows_names 0 0