Note To Self. Cartoon made in Inkscape.

[Kumeelyun]

I had a few ideas rolling around and decided to further implement the Comic Press theme (http://mindfaucet.com/comicpress/) in my site. It's a little observational comic I'm calling 'Note To Self'. Any feedback is welcome.

Click here for the comic. (http://www.hoodyhoo.com/2007/06/12/note-to-self-1-target-os/)

Thanks for looking.

[maruchan]

Ha...nice work! :)

Edit: You asked for feedback: I think the illustration is very clear, except the green grass/bushes can be a little confusing. I was trying to figure out why the Mac target had two stems coming together to one flower, because I originally thought they were flowers (the green parts being leaves) :) So maybe use one long clump of grass instead of two separate clumps, and give all the targets either one or two legs, for continuity?

[hikaricore]

That's awesome. :)